A Moral Lesson For All

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Emilia Guzman
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Re: A Moral Lesson For All

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Don't be scared, its only about a girl who enters a haunted house and never sees the light of day again, that's all. :twisted:
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:shock: :shock: :shock: Can I read it? (no I'm kidding)
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Emilia Guzman
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Re: A Moral Lesson For All

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Its illustrated too! :twisted: (I've already made the cover! its really creepy :twisted: ) MuHaHaHaHaHa :twisted:
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Re: A Moral Lesson For All

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Agnes Steuben wrote: Thu Mar 09, 2023 11:03 am I have no idea why I wrote this story. I guess I was bored 8-)



This is the life story of a young boy who was always pulling pranks. Until the day they backfired on him.

Here’s how it goes:

He awoke one Sunday in the middle of the night, to a gloomy outdoors, and the constant sound of thunder echoing through the halls of the mansion.

The perfect time, the boy thought, to pull a simple prank on his sister. He found an old white sheet and cut two holes for his eyes, he then pulled it over himself, enveloping himself in white. He was a ghost, on a dark stormy night, haunting an old house. And its target was the girl who dwelt in it.

He walked over to his sister’s room, making eerie noises and knocking things over along the way. He arrived at the door and snuck in, quite as can be. No noise besides the resounding of thunder through the worn walls of the mansion.

The boy went right next to his sleeping sister, staring intently at her, waiting with anticipation for her to awake. A scream pierced the air, and the boy jumped backward with fright, not expecting his sister to wake so soon, and he fell through the girl’s open window, right into the moat full of alligators.

The boy was seen no more, and life at the mansion went on.

Nobody knew what had happened to the prank pulling lad. No one except his sister...
Your story is so scary! :shock: That proves it was well written because it was meant to be scary :D Nice job!
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Cecilia Bollig
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Re: A Moral Lesson For All

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Emilia Guzman wrote: Fri Mar 24, 2023 9:53 am Its illustrated too! :twisted: (I've already made the cover! its really creepy :twisted: ) MuHaHaHaHaHa :twisted:
Let's see it!! :lol: (I think I'm kidding) :lol:
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Sure! If I can take a picture small enough.
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Cecilia Bollig
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Oh hooray! We get to get creeped out! :lol:
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Agnes Steuben
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Re: A Moral Lesson For All

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Gianna Bollig wrote: Fri Mar 24, 2023 10:36 am
Your story is so scary! :shock: That proves it was well written because it was meant to be scary :D Nice job!
Thank you Gianna! I'm not usually so dark in my writing :lol: Guess I was feeling morbid at the time... ;)
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